an eye for an eye
and a tooth for a tooth
and so such sayings whisper
“the past won’t pass til suns set on necks of unbelievers”
whisper to blades of grass
til all is struck with human pestilence
and meadow bird’s blood
pools in shadows struck
with whispered unforgiveness
remember not the olive tree, the dove which hides within her
forgive not
but rather whisper to the sword
til blood pours off the gleaming edge
and wailing
dying
children
must now live to kill their neighbor
because of familie’s feud fed
home grown anger
what chance have these
of life itself
growing in all its splendor
when caught upon
edges of tongues who whisper
Avenge
now is never ?
Powerful and worthwhile shared dear Poet. Need to be read by more people.
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Oh John… ur words are so kind… thank u so much
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I did like this one. A writer want the reader to think. These words do and you are welcome Kae.
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:)… such an encourager u are to fledgling bloggers like myself:)
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You are amazing dear Kae. People, who write. Always seek improvement.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Please read the worthwhile words of a talented writer.
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Interesting opening lines as I’ve always felt that the old adage leaves everyone toothless and blind (kind of funny -and sad at the same time – if you think about it). I’ve always found the best way to avenge the wrongdoing of ourselves or another is to simply move past it and live life, happily and prosperously. Nothing really gets beneath the skin of those wishing us harm than witnessing us living life to the fullest. I love where this piece took me. Thanks for sharing this, Kae!
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:)… thanks for ur kind encouragement
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You are most welcome 🙂
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Beautiful. I love it.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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You’re welcome!!
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Thanks so much:)
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You’re welcome!!
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